gizmo
06-30-2009, 01:56 PM
OK peps, i haven't wrote anything since the last one i showed you all and i wrote that in 2005. this one started out as a Mickey take because my bathroom mirror steamed up ( very random i know) anyways from there it turned into a bit of a story and i ended up with this. i hate showing my stuff to people because I'm scared they will take the Mick i know you all here are friends and what ever you say is only meant to make me better. that i can take and learn from... anyways here it is and please let me know what you think and be honest...
p.s i haven't got a title for it yet
I looked into the mirror
but i could not see
for the water was hot
and made it steamy
so i toke a cloth
and rubbed it over
and standing behind me
right behind my shoulder
i saw a man
with a smiling face
i turned to look
but saw nothing but space
i toke my gaze back to the mirror
he was there again
this smiling figure
i asked the man
what is your name
he simply said
my dear its never the same
some people see me as the glorious one
but i am just god when its all said and done
i smiled at him
and asked why are you here
he replied don't worry you have nothing to fear
i want you to know
it was all meant to be
they are with me now
up there you see
they asked me to tell you that all is just fine
you'll see them again
just give it some time
then i awoke
from a dream it would seem
or maybe... could it have been!!!
ok there it is, please let me know
p.s i haven't got a title for it yet
I looked into the mirror
but i could not see
for the water was hot
and made it steamy
so i toke a cloth
and rubbed it over
and standing behind me
right behind my shoulder
i saw a man
with a smiling face
i turned to look
but saw nothing but space
i toke my gaze back to the mirror
he was there again
this smiling figure
i asked the man
what is your name
he simply said
my dear its never the same
some people see me as the glorious one
but i am just god when its all said and done
i smiled at him
and asked why are you here
he replied don't worry you have nothing to fear
i want you to know
it was all meant to be
they are with me now
up there you see
they asked me to tell you that all is just fine
you'll see them again
just give it some time
then i awoke
from a dream it would seem
or maybe... could it have been!!!
ok there it is, please let me know