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Rimbaud_fan#1
04-24-2006, 12:27 PM
Hey guys, check out this poem I wrote last night. What do you think?



fading images

searching for images
like animals in the dark
searching for images
in a decadent, electronic park
searching for images
deep, down in the night
searching for images
that make our eyes all white

dreaming of images
like sleeping, famous girls
dreaming of images
that haunt electrinic worlds
dreaming of images
beyond an electronic door
dreaming of images
locked up in a sparkling store

i feel the tingle of
the camera's sweet eye
not untill i'm in perfect photographs
am i ready to die

i think slowly we are all
becoming images
like ghosts in the night
becoming images
and fading out of sight
becoming images
and it feels so soft and right
becoming images

eilz7
05-12-2006, 07:59 AM
its sooo good!
alee
xxx