JenJen3
05-16-2006, 12:36 AM
I wrote this a few years ago...it could probably have more added, I just have never added on. I have to reply to this with part of it, because of it's length....
Prologue
*Phone Ringing*
“Hello?” was the greeting given after answering the phone. “Whit? Hey. Guess what?!?” “What have you done this time, Theresa?” Whitney asked. “WHIT! How can you say that to your best friend!?” “I’m sorry, Theresa, but it was a reflex. You had the ‘Oops! I did it again’ tone to your voice. I tell you what, why don’t you come over here and tell me what this is all about. Ok?” “Alright, Whit. I’ll be over in a few, bye.” “Ok, see you then, bye.”
*Both girls hang yo their phones. About 5-10 minutes later…..*
*Knock, knock*
Whitney opens the front door to the Russell house, and the two girls, as usual, walk up to Whitney’s room. “Now, you want to tell me what this is all about?” Theresa, going through Whitney’s closet, “Whit, I need to borrow something exquesite!” A confused Whitney asks, “Why?” “Because I have a date!” squeals an excited Theresa. Whitney replys, “Let me guess, you decided to move on now that Gwen and Ethan got back together?” An almost annoyed Theresa responds, “No! Ok, yeah Gwen and I are friends again and I am ready to move on so I decided to.” “Oh, I see. Borrow whatever you like. It’s all up to you.” “Thanks! Whit!”
“Not a problem, Theresa. Hey, what are friends for, anyway.” “So true, Whit, so true.”
Chapter 1 - Getting Ready For The Date
There was a knock at the front door of the Lopez-Fitzgerald home at 6:30 p.m. the following day. Luis got up from the couch, where he was sitting, and talking with his fiancee, Sheridan Crane. He opened the door, and to his surprize, it was his best friend, Hank Bennett, looking like he was ready for a date.
“Hank, whatcha doin’ here……I, uh I’m sorry, Hank, where’s my manners, hey, how are you? Why do you look like your ready for a date?” A puzzled Luis asked.
“Sorry to spring this on ya, buddy, but I’m here to pick up Theresa. For our date. Is she ready?” was Hank’s reply.
“Theresa? Your date? You’re going out with my baby sister?” Hank replied “Yes, Luis. She’s a great person. She’s warm and caring and, well, she’s hot. I asked her out and she said yes, so is she ready yet?” “I’ll check, so I’ll be right back.” Luis went to Theresa’s bedroom and lightly knocked on the door and she lightly replied, “come in.”
“Since when did you go out with my friend?” Luis asked. “Oh my gosh! Hank’s here, ALREADY?!?!? And I’m nowhere near ready…” “Theresa, answer me!” Luis demanded. “Huh? Oh, if you must know, I am now ready to move on with my life, afterall, Gwen and I are friends again plus she and Ethan got back together. Hank asked me out and I said yes. I’ve known him all of my life and he’s a great guy.” Luis responded, “Theresa, I know Hank’s a great guy, he is my best friend, but he is a womanizing-heartbreaker. He’s broken the heart of many women, and then the next day move on tothe next victim. I just don’t want to see it happen to you. I’m just looking out for you. Yes, he’s my best friend, and I love him, like a brother, but if he hurts you, with God as my witness, I will beat the living **** out of his hard-working ***!”
Chapter 2 - And The Date Begins
Theresa sprayed on some perfume and walked out of her bedroom, right behind Luis. Hank looked on in amazement.
“Wow! Theresa you look gorgeous…I mean, you’re always gorgeous, but, man, you look amazing!” A blushing Theresa replied, “Thank you, Hank. You don’t look half-bad yourself.” A still bewildered Luis asked, “You two…..why didnt you say something first. I had no idea ya liked each other.” “Luis, buddy, you know my track record. I didn’t think you’d let Theresa go out with me and I really want to give a possible relationship with her a chance. I think we’d be great together. That’s what tonight is all about — seeing if there is any chemestry between us. I seriously think that this is just what I need to ‘turn over a new leaf’. You know that I’ve been trying to change my ways lately…’grow up a little’ and I think the best way to do that, is to go out with a different kind of woman. Not the cheap, easy, one-timer tramps that I used to be into, not anymore. Now I want a real woman; A classy, intelligent, sweet, good-natured woman. Someone that I can have a REAL relationship with. Someone that just might be ‘the one’. I want what you and Sheridan have, and, by george, I’m gonna go out and get it.”
Theresa added, “Luis, I agree. You and Sheridan have a rock-solid realtionship…I thought that’s what I had with Ethan, but I was wrong. I think there could be something between Hank and I and the only way we are ever gonna know for sure is if we go out.” “Theresa, Hank, if you guys want what Sheridan and I have and think you might find it with each other, and want to go out on a date to find out for sure, then why are you still standing here talking about it with me? Go on. Get out of here.”
Hank then helped Theresa on with her coat, and as they said their goodbyes to Luis and Sheridan. Theresa leaned up on her toes and and gave her big brother a hug and a quick kiss on the cheek.
Chapter 3 - The Date
Hank opened Theresa’s car door for her. “Theresa, I’m really glad Luis didn’t try to stop us. I really think we might have something great here.” Hank got in on the other side and Theresa said, “Hank, I totally agree. I’m totally glad that he didn’t try to keep us from seeing each other. I really think there could be something her between us. So, where are we going?” Hank had a smug look on his face and simply replied, “Now, that is you’re suprise, Theresa.” They drove around for a little while and then pulled into a parking space at the Lobster Shack. Hank quickly got out and raced over to open her door. He put his arm around her and they walked inside. The host seated them at a cosy corner table with their menus. After deciding on their meals and ordering, Theresa said, “You know, I’m really friends with Gwen again. And Ethan too. And what makes it all even better, Ivy and I are on good speaking terms again, plus she and mama renewed their friendship.”
After the waiter brought their order Hank said, “I’m really glad you’re so happy, Theresa. Happiness suits you, it really does. And it’s completely obvious, when you’re happy, you beam.”
Theresa replied, “Thank you, Hank.” “No need to thank me for the truth, Theresa, but, your welcome.”
After they finished eating and the check was paid for, they left the Lobster Shack and went to the Book Cafe. They went up to the counter where their friends, Chad and his girlfriend (Theresa’s best friend) Whitney, were standing. “Oh, what can I get you guys?” Chad asked. As Theresa whispered into Hank’s ear, he responded, “Two Espressos.” Chad replied, Coming right up, man.” When their drinks were ready, they walked over to one of the Book Cafe’s cosy couches and sat down. Theresa began, “I’ve told you about my thoughts and feelings and you already know that I want to go back to work for Ivy, because I love working with fashion. Tell me about you’re hopes and dreams.” “Well, someday I want a family. But, as for short-term, next week I’m going to take the police entrance exam. I really hope I can pass it. After working with the FBI, helping Sheridan escape the drug cartel, I realized, I really enjoy police work.”
“Well, Hank, I’ll be rooting for ya” Theresa responded. Not realizing how late it was getting, Chad came over and said, “Um, you guys are gonna have to get goin’. It’s time for me to close the place up for the night.”
Theresa and Hank didn’t realize it was midnight already. “Oh! God, Theresa, I can’t believe it’s so late we’ve been sitting here talking for 6 hours!” Hank drove her home, and walked her to the door and he paused and said, “I had the best night of my life tonight, Theresa.” “Me too, Hank.”
Hank leaned in to give her a goodnight kiss and on her right cheek he gave her the sweetest, most gentle kiss that she’d ever received. Then they both said goodnight and as she opened the front door, he walked to his car. She entered her house, closed the door, and with a big smile on her face, she leaned against it, and gave a big happy sigh.
Chapter 4 - Will You Marry Me?
“Mornin’ Mama!” Theresa said as she bounced into the kitchen at 9 a.m. “Good morning, Theresa. I must say you’re absolutely beaming.” Theresa replied, “Well, Mama, today is a very special day. It’s the 18 month anniversary of my very first date with Hank.” “Oh, I see, sweetie. Well, how are you this morning?” Just as Theresa opened her mouth to answer her mother, there was a knock at the front door. Instead of answering her mother, Theresa said, “I’ll get the door Mama.” When she opened the door, Theresa was met wih a suprise. “Hank, what are you doing her so early in the morning? Come in, come in.” After Hank closed the door behind him, he dropped down to one knee in front of his beloved girlfriend and said, “Theresa, sweetheart, you know that I love you more than life itself. I would walk to the end of the galaxy for you.
You, darling, are the air I breathe, the water I drink, and the sun that lights my day. I adore the ground you walk on. It would be a dream come true to spend the rest of my life with you as my wife.” Hank paused. He reached into his pocket and got out a little gray velvet box. He opened it, revealing a shimmering, sparkling diamond ring. He then continued, “Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald, will you marry me?” With tears in her eyes, Theresa responded, “YES! I will Hank!!” They kissed and he slipped the ring upon her finger.
They walked hand-in-hand to the kitchen where Luis, Sheridan, Pilar and Migel were sitting, waiting for them so breakfast could begin. Theresa announced, “Before we begin breakfast, Hank and I have an announcement. We’re ENGAGED!!!!!” Theresa squealed and showed off her ring to Pilar and Sheridan. Sheridan said, “Now we can have that double wedding we’ve always wanted.”
Luis and Miguel looked at Hank and Luis said, “Hank, buddy, welcome to the family.” Then they sat down for breakfast.
Prologue
*Phone Ringing*
“Hello?” was the greeting given after answering the phone. “Whit? Hey. Guess what?!?” “What have you done this time, Theresa?” Whitney asked. “WHIT! How can you say that to your best friend!?” “I’m sorry, Theresa, but it was a reflex. You had the ‘Oops! I did it again’ tone to your voice. I tell you what, why don’t you come over here and tell me what this is all about. Ok?” “Alright, Whit. I’ll be over in a few, bye.” “Ok, see you then, bye.”
*Both girls hang yo their phones. About 5-10 minutes later…..*
*Knock, knock*
Whitney opens the front door to the Russell house, and the two girls, as usual, walk up to Whitney’s room. “Now, you want to tell me what this is all about?” Theresa, going through Whitney’s closet, “Whit, I need to borrow something exquesite!” A confused Whitney asks, “Why?” “Because I have a date!” squeals an excited Theresa. Whitney replys, “Let me guess, you decided to move on now that Gwen and Ethan got back together?” An almost annoyed Theresa responds, “No! Ok, yeah Gwen and I are friends again and I am ready to move on so I decided to.” “Oh, I see. Borrow whatever you like. It’s all up to you.” “Thanks! Whit!”
“Not a problem, Theresa. Hey, what are friends for, anyway.” “So true, Whit, so true.”
Chapter 1 - Getting Ready For The Date
There was a knock at the front door of the Lopez-Fitzgerald home at 6:30 p.m. the following day. Luis got up from the couch, where he was sitting, and talking with his fiancee, Sheridan Crane. He opened the door, and to his surprize, it was his best friend, Hank Bennett, looking like he was ready for a date.
“Hank, whatcha doin’ here……I, uh I’m sorry, Hank, where’s my manners, hey, how are you? Why do you look like your ready for a date?” A puzzled Luis asked.
“Sorry to spring this on ya, buddy, but I’m here to pick up Theresa. For our date. Is she ready?” was Hank’s reply.
“Theresa? Your date? You’re going out with my baby sister?” Hank replied “Yes, Luis. She’s a great person. She’s warm and caring and, well, she’s hot. I asked her out and she said yes, so is she ready yet?” “I’ll check, so I’ll be right back.” Luis went to Theresa’s bedroom and lightly knocked on the door and she lightly replied, “come in.”
“Since when did you go out with my friend?” Luis asked. “Oh my gosh! Hank’s here, ALREADY?!?!? And I’m nowhere near ready…” “Theresa, answer me!” Luis demanded. “Huh? Oh, if you must know, I am now ready to move on with my life, afterall, Gwen and I are friends again plus she and Ethan got back together. Hank asked me out and I said yes. I’ve known him all of my life and he’s a great guy.” Luis responded, “Theresa, I know Hank’s a great guy, he is my best friend, but he is a womanizing-heartbreaker. He’s broken the heart of many women, and then the next day move on tothe next victim. I just don’t want to see it happen to you. I’m just looking out for you. Yes, he’s my best friend, and I love him, like a brother, but if he hurts you, with God as my witness, I will beat the living **** out of his hard-working ***!”
Chapter 2 - And The Date Begins
Theresa sprayed on some perfume and walked out of her bedroom, right behind Luis. Hank looked on in amazement.
“Wow! Theresa you look gorgeous…I mean, you’re always gorgeous, but, man, you look amazing!” A blushing Theresa replied, “Thank you, Hank. You don’t look half-bad yourself.” A still bewildered Luis asked, “You two…..why didnt you say something first. I had no idea ya liked each other.” “Luis, buddy, you know my track record. I didn’t think you’d let Theresa go out with me and I really want to give a possible relationship with her a chance. I think we’d be great together. That’s what tonight is all about — seeing if there is any chemestry between us. I seriously think that this is just what I need to ‘turn over a new leaf’. You know that I’ve been trying to change my ways lately…’grow up a little’ and I think the best way to do that, is to go out with a different kind of woman. Not the cheap, easy, one-timer tramps that I used to be into, not anymore. Now I want a real woman; A classy, intelligent, sweet, good-natured woman. Someone that I can have a REAL relationship with. Someone that just might be ‘the one’. I want what you and Sheridan have, and, by george, I’m gonna go out and get it.”
Theresa added, “Luis, I agree. You and Sheridan have a rock-solid realtionship…I thought that’s what I had with Ethan, but I was wrong. I think there could be something between Hank and I and the only way we are ever gonna know for sure is if we go out.” “Theresa, Hank, if you guys want what Sheridan and I have and think you might find it with each other, and want to go out on a date to find out for sure, then why are you still standing here talking about it with me? Go on. Get out of here.”
Hank then helped Theresa on with her coat, and as they said their goodbyes to Luis and Sheridan. Theresa leaned up on her toes and and gave her big brother a hug and a quick kiss on the cheek.
Chapter 3 - The Date
Hank opened Theresa’s car door for her. “Theresa, I’m really glad Luis didn’t try to stop us. I really think we might have something great here.” Hank got in on the other side and Theresa said, “Hank, I totally agree. I’m totally glad that he didn’t try to keep us from seeing each other. I really think there could be something her between us. So, where are we going?” Hank had a smug look on his face and simply replied, “Now, that is you’re suprise, Theresa.” They drove around for a little while and then pulled into a parking space at the Lobster Shack. Hank quickly got out and raced over to open her door. He put his arm around her and they walked inside. The host seated them at a cosy corner table with their menus. After deciding on their meals and ordering, Theresa said, “You know, I’m really friends with Gwen again. And Ethan too. And what makes it all even better, Ivy and I are on good speaking terms again, plus she and mama renewed their friendship.”
After the waiter brought their order Hank said, “I’m really glad you’re so happy, Theresa. Happiness suits you, it really does. And it’s completely obvious, when you’re happy, you beam.”
Theresa replied, “Thank you, Hank.” “No need to thank me for the truth, Theresa, but, your welcome.”
After they finished eating and the check was paid for, they left the Lobster Shack and went to the Book Cafe. They went up to the counter where their friends, Chad and his girlfriend (Theresa’s best friend) Whitney, were standing. “Oh, what can I get you guys?” Chad asked. As Theresa whispered into Hank’s ear, he responded, “Two Espressos.” Chad replied, Coming right up, man.” When their drinks were ready, they walked over to one of the Book Cafe’s cosy couches and sat down. Theresa began, “I’ve told you about my thoughts and feelings and you already know that I want to go back to work for Ivy, because I love working with fashion. Tell me about you’re hopes and dreams.” “Well, someday I want a family. But, as for short-term, next week I’m going to take the police entrance exam. I really hope I can pass it. After working with the FBI, helping Sheridan escape the drug cartel, I realized, I really enjoy police work.”
“Well, Hank, I’ll be rooting for ya” Theresa responded. Not realizing how late it was getting, Chad came over and said, “Um, you guys are gonna have to get goin’. It’s time for me to close the place up for the night.”
Theresa and Hank didn’t realize it was midnight already. “Oh! God, Theresa, I can’t believe it’s so late we’ve been sitting here talking for 6 hours!” Hank drove her home, and walked her to the door and he paused and said, “I had the best night of my life tonight, Theresa.” “Me too, Hank.”
Hank leaned in to give her a goodnight kiss and on her right cheek he gave her the sweetest, most gentle kiss that she’d ever received. Then they both said goodnight and as she opened the front door, he walked to his car. She entered her house, closed the door, and with a big smile on her face, she leaned against it, and gave a big happy sigh.
Chapter 4 - Will You Marry Me?
“Mornin’ Mama!” Theresa said as she bounced into the kitchen at 9 a.m. “Good morning, Theresa. I must say you’re absolutely beaming.” Theresa replied, “Well, Mama, today is a very special day. It’s the 18 month anniversary of my very first date with Hank.” “Oh, I see, sweetie. Well, how are you this morning?” Just as Theresa opened her mouth to answer her mother, there was a knock at the front door. Instead of answering her mother, Theresa said, “I’ll get the door Mama.” When she opened the door, Theresa was met wih a suprise. “Hank, what are you doing her so early in the morning? Come in, come in.” After Hank closed the door behind him, he dropped down to one knee in front of his beloved girlfriend and said, “Theresa, sweetheart, you know that I love you more than life itself. I would walk to the end of the galaxy for you.
You, darling, are the air I breathe, the water I drink, and the sun that lights my day. I adore the ground you walk on. It would be a dream come true to spend the rest of my life with you as my wife.” Hank paused. He reached into his pocket and got out a little gray velvet box. He opened it, revealing a shimmering, sparkling diamond ring. He then continued, “Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald, will you marry me?” With tears in her eyes, Theresa responded, “YES! I will Hank!!” They kissed and he slipped the ring upon her finger.
They walked hand-in-hand to the kitchen where Luis, Sheridan, Pilar and Migel were sitting, waiting for them so breakfast could begin. Theresa announced, “Before we begin breakfast, Hank and I have an announcement. We’re ENGAGED!!!!!” Theresa squealed and showed off her ring to Pilar and Sheridan. Sheridan said, “Now we can have that double wedding we’ve always wanted.”
Luis and Miguel looked at Hank and Luis said, “Hank, buddy, welcome to the family.” Then they sat down for breakfast.