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Isabis
07-09-2006, 01:25 PM
Fire Before the Doorway:
I hope you like my poem, tell me if you like it or not; be honest.


I was stupid to have let you go the time was mine

Beautiful in your grace, I let this fly it was mine

It was almost like a dream I had a chance you see

I did everything right till I came to a stop, it was me

Staring back in the darkness was envy and deceit

Instead of running away I openend up my arms to you I gladly met

The hate inside you released was out it was already set

Time went by I forgot you were even there

Like a leech I let you take away my soul

By the time I remembered you were there, I realized you were foul

To late for words the damage was done

Like the golden gates you once were, you soon turned to iron

I tried to open you, and you were locked, not a sound

Now a wonder and wait will there be a next time with you around

Hannah
07-13-2006, 03:53 AM
Isabis that is a great poem!

Isabis
08-02-2006, 01:25 PM
Hey thanks!