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Hannah
07-13-2006, 04:08 AM
Ok I don't usually share my poetry because to me it doesn't sound right but hey lets see what you all think!
Love Is To Me
A bittersweet taste
A sting like a been
A prick from a thorn
That's how love is to me
A feeling so sore
One I can't bear
I'm wanting more
but I'm left here
Help I'm in need of
But none will I get
An addiction to rid of
My tears are so wet
Left here so empty
So cold So alone
Someone please save me
I want to go home
I don't know why I called it Love is to Me because I only use that line once but it seemed to fit!
Hannah
07-13-2006, 04:15 AM
This one I wrote last night. I don't think it makes sense but once I started righting I couldn't stop!
An Angel came to me
An Angel came to me
In the middle of the night
With her Golden Glow she told me
That something's not right
I searched but could not find
Something that would give me
Some piece of mind
What should I do?
I asked her hoping to seek
An answer to the one thing
That makes me so weak
Open your eyes
And look all around
Look to the skies
And there you will find
The answers you seek
The things that must change
But not just for you
The numbers they range
Those who suffer and try
Those who don't and cry
All need your help
So go to them my friend
Their lives must not end
The Angel she left
But soon she came back
With her golden glow
And a glistening sack
From the sack she pulled an orb
So wonderful, so bright
This is peace she told me
And you must share it tonight
So off I went in search of those
Who needed my help
With the orb so bright
In the darkness of night
The problems I changed
The numbers don't range
The world is alright
I'll sleep tonight
I didn't realise it was so long! I was even changing things as I was typing it so it made more sense! I think its long enough that I could turn it into a song lol!
Hannah
07-13-2006, 04:20 AM
Ok this is the last one! Hopefully it won't turn out to be as long as the last one!
When
When will I be happy
In this skin I'm in
With the world I'm in
When will I spread my wings
And truely learn to fly
Up into the skies
And open up my eyes
To the little beauty left
That's not touched by destruction yet
The beauty that people
They seem to forget
When will I learn
To really be myself
With the knowledged I earnt
In the life I'm in
When will people finally see
The person I am, The real me
The one who cares
The one who shares
When will they see
That I can only be me
And not who they're hoping
I'll turn out to be
When will I be happy
And used to the things
That people say
That day is today
I'm doing things my way
When will they see
That I am Me
Ok it's still slightly long but hey I hope you like them
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