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Ozzie
06-21-2007, 12:02 AM
Here's a little poem I wrote some time ago, to someone who was special to me. Alas, no more, but if any of you guys like it, feel free to copy it and use it yourselves. I think the girls will like it:)

I see you, crowned by Selene's glory
Standing before me, unabashed, free
The sweet scent of your womanhood
Wafts upon the breeze to my nose
And brings me to ever present reality

I see you, the curves of your body
Perfectly traced by lacy clouds
Of silken expanse, like the mist
Which fills the valleys of my mind
Tantalizingly close, yet far away

You come to me, Oh Goddess
As if in a dream, and yet
You are as real to me as the Day
As mystical as the darkest Night
Love in its most primeval intensity

*Lilac*
06-21-2007, 01:39 AM
Lovely poem Ozzie thanks for sharing :D

*Lilac* xxx

kmh big fan
06-21-2007, 05:29 AM
That is such a lovely poem Ozzie
It reminds me of a poem I was studying for my English Lit. class, but I enjoyed yours much more :)
Thank you for sharing with us.

Lin Shaye
06-22-2007, 08:20 PM
Beautiful Ozzie. Your really capture an essence in it of someone who was loved and appreciated. Keep up the wonderful work.

Zoee
06-22-2007, 10:21 PM
Such lovely words, my big brother. Beautiful :)

Ozzie
06-22-2007, 11:44 PM
Thanks guys:D:D

donoho
06-23-2007, 09:16 AM
Great poem Ozzie!

Ozzie
06-23-2007, 04:50 PM
If you knew the flu
Like I knew the flu
Then you'd have it too
Poor little you

Sneeze wheeze
cough in the breeze
Brought to your knees
Blow my nose with little ease

Rain rain, go away
I don't want this flu today
Give me cause to get better
Despite this rather gloomy weather

:D:D

Vick
06-23-2007, 05:07 PM
very cute Ozzie...
Sorry you're not feeling well but love the poem:p;)

Vick
06-23-2007, 05:09 PM
Perfectly traced by lacy clouds
Of silken expanse, like the mist
Which fills the valleys of my mind
Tantalizingly close, yet far away
You are so wonderfully descriptive...
This in particular paints such a detailed picture

donoho
06-23-2007, 05:09 PM
Aww...cute. I love it. Sorry you're not feeling too well though.

kmh big fan
06-24-2007, 03:44 PM
Very nice poem :D
Sorry that you have the flu, but I really like your poem :D

Zoee
06-25-2007, 02:36 AM
Very cute, Ozman :D I am coming down with a bug I think, so I'll be singing that song is a few days!

Ozzie
06-25-2007, 03:41 AM
Very cute, Ozman :D I am coming down with a bug I think, so I'll be singing that song is a few days!

Maybe, you and I......a duet??:eek::D:p

raggs
06-25-2007, 04:00 AM
Why. Ozzie, you old romantic you. That girl missed out on the chance of a lifetime. ;)

larry_h
06-25-2007, 07:01 AM
I was wondering a little bit why you would write an ode to the flue. But the poem is cute. Hope you feel better.

-Larry

Lin Shaye
06-25-2007, 03:31 PM
I agree with Raggs! I know there will be "the one" coming along your way!

Lin Shaye
06-25-2007, 03:32 PM
Dear Ozman...My the flu fly far away....and never come back ANY day!!! (a tiny "ditty!")

Ozzie
06-25-2007, 04:35 PM
Dear Ozman...My the flu fly far away....and never come back ANY day!!! (a tiny "ditty!")

How I wish that mine what do
What yours has done just for you
But this damn flu is hanging around

can't think of a word which rhymes....my brain's in reverse!!!:p:D....damn:eek:

Ozzie
06-25-2007, 04:38 PM
I agree with Raggs! I know there will be "the one" coming along your way!

We can only but hope!!:p:D:D

Why. Ozzie, you old romantic you. That girl missed out on the chance of a lifetime. ;)

:p Her bad, I suppose.

Lin Shaye
06-25-2007, 04:48 PM
..."buzzing 'round My Head With Sneezy Sound!"

Lin Shaye
06-25-2007, 04:50 PM
Her "stupic-awful"...is more like it!!

Ozzie
06-25-2007, 06:01 PM
..."buzzing 'round My Head With Sneezy Sound!"

Thank you, Dear Lady:D

You saved my ditty:D:D

Ozzie
06-25-2007, 06:09 PM
Her "stupic-awful"...is more like it!!

Oh well, that's the way the cookie crumbles:)

reddogg
06-26-2007, 02:24 AM
That's really lovely, Ozzie :)

The most romantic thing my other half ever said to me was "I'll get your Valentine's Day flowers next week when the prices come down again" ;) :D

Lin Shaye
06-27-2007, 04:48 PM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Chooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Lin Shaye
06-27-2007, 04:50 PM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH REDDOG!!!!!!!!!....I guess ya gotta love him for his common sense!

Ozzie
06-27-2007, 05:12 PM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH REDDOG!!!!!!!!!....I guess ya gotta love him for his common sense!

....and practicality

Ozzie
06-27-2007, 05:13 PM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Chooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Passes Lin a box of tissues:p:D

Ozzie
07-02-2007, 07:57 AM
Here's another poem I've just made up:D

Enjoy....:D



The touch of her fingers on my face
Is the wafting of silken filligries in the breeze
Her caresses like the gentle dapples of sunshine
through the leaves of the trees

Her beauty colors my existence
As the leaves of Autumn does the forest
Her sweet scent parades across my mind
A kaleidoscope of odors, flowering tumescence

The soft melody of her voice
Carries like the songs of angels
Across my mind's eye to my inner being
and holds me like a mother's womb

Her eyes speak to me the truth
The essence of her soul so deep and calm
Pools of pure mystical liquid, aqua vitae
The spring from which all life and love derive

Ozzie
07-02-2007, 08:29 AM
and another......:D


"Pride goeth before a fall"
So say the wise
Though wisdom comes not from spoken words
But through experience and silent counsel

You who speak in urgent prose
An ideology of intellectualism
From the babbling of learned fools you quote
Revelation finds no substance

To you who cannot see the truth
Who hide behind another's dictates
What of it that your faith is steadfast
For you existence is always blind

Ozzie
07-02-2007, 09:06 AM
One last one before I goto the land of "nod":D

Carpe diem, totus vel nullius
Cogito ego sum, verum ego sum
Divinus mico en totus
Ist es substantia homo

Seize the day, all or none
I think therefore I am, truly I am one
Divine spark in all
This is the essence of man