Polly08
08-05-2007, 03:50 AM
Hey everyone! The otherday I was bored so I decided to write a Poem. I'm not so very good at english so there is probably alot of mistakes in it but I wanted to share it with you and see what you think of it. :)
When trouble seem to be on my back,
and every day that used to be bright is now black.
When darkness are closing in on my soul,
and my heart is no longer whole.
Tears are gently rolling down my cheeks at night,
and I no longer want to fight.
I stare up in the white ceiling,
and want to get rid of this horrible feeling.
Things are terribly wrong,
and I've tried to deal with this pain for so long.
I remember your bright smile and gently words,
Something I will treasure in my heart forever more,
and my heart will no longer sore.
But I know I'll never forgive her for what she did.
How much I even try I know can't love her as I should,
she hurt me really bad and I was just a kid.
I don't know if I'll ever be good.
Once you saw right through my eyes and in to my soul,
you saw the big black hole.
I couldn't twist and turn the truth when I talked to you,
You knew how I felt and knew exactly what to do.
You were someone I could trust, you were my friend.
You hoped that you my heart could mend.
You brought me confidence and love that I didn't had,
You gave me a reason to live and for that I'm more than glad.
I finally felt like I meant something again,
when I'm with you I forget all my pain.
You're like the sister I never had,
if you go away now you're gonna make me really sad.
You're like a band-aid who keeps me from falling apart,
even your love alleviate the pain in my heart.
I don't know how to thank you for always being there,
without you I don't know how much more I could bear.
One thing that I've learnt is that life isn't always fair,
but it feels good to have someone around who cares.
I will always remember you
My whole life through....
This is to a friend of mine....I haven't showed her the poem yet though....:o
What did you think? please let me know.
When trouble seem to be on my back,
and every day that used to be bright is now black.
When darkness are closing in on my soul,
and my heart is no longer whole.
Tears are gently rolling down my cheeks at night,
and I no longer want to fight.
I stare up in the white ceiling,
and want to get rid of this horrible feeling.
Things are terribly wrong,
and I've tried to deal with this pain for so long.
I remember your bright smile and gently words,
Something I will treasure in my heart forever more,
and my heart will no longer sore.
But I know I'll never forgive her for what she did.
How much I even try I know can't love her as I should,
she hurt me really bad and I was just a kid.
I don't know if I'll ever be good.
Once you saw right through my eyes and in to my soul,
you saw the big black hole.
I couldn't twist and turn the truth when I talked to you,
You knew how I felt and knew exactly what to do.
You were someone I could trust, you were my friend.
You hoped that you my heart could mend.
You brought me confidence and love that I didn't had,
You gave me a reason to live and for that I'm more than glad.
I finally felt like I meant something again,
when I'm with you I forget all my pain.
You're like the sister I never had,
if you go away now you're gonna make me really sad.
You're like a band-aid who keeps me from falling apart,
even your love alleviate the pain in my heart.
I don't know how to thank you for always being there,
without you I don't know how much more I could bear.
One thing that I've learnt is that life isn't always fair,
but it feels good to have someone around who cares.
I will always remember you
My whole life through....
This is to a friend of mine....I haven't showed her the poem yet though....:o
What did you think? please let me know.