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ana_s
10-17-2007, 11:43 AM
Gosh,I just garra say you've got so many awesome things on this board,so many talented ppl around here (hope I can be one of them but shhh):p

I dont know if this is a poetry but I just thought I whould share & let u know me a lil better...so here I come :D



Somewhere else

Two hours pass
since the last time I sow the light,
I must have slept away
and let the dreams be waisted away.
Looking at the same picture on the wall,
what is on my mind,
I have to go!
The air,the light,the day,
its all gone,
Im all alone,
in my hell.
And I reach for the sun,
for anything right,
but I can't let go
the old picture on the wall.

I can't breath,
there's nothing left to do,
same old me,same old scene
again and again.
Will this day ever end?
I can't tell you how I feel,
you'll think Im crazy
well maybe I am,
Who's to know,
I garra go
somewhere else...!

I keep hearing people say
"she's all right,
she can live trough the day",
but,what they dont know
is what they dont see.
I hide it deep,
the dark,the soul,my dreams,
they dont see,they dont care,
some sort of life is out there,
I can reach for it,
I can try,
Still sitting in the room,
waiting,hoping,
for better to start...

But I'll feel the same,
no metter where,
The change has to come from within,
Where from here??

let me know what u think ;)

Vick
10-17-2007, 01:10 PM
Wow Ana...
That was really great...
Who knew you were so incredibly talented...?

It was deep and painted a picture of quiet desperation.
Very well done ..;):D

BiLlYbEnAsSi
10-17-2007, 10:26 PM
Hvala for sharing your poemmmmmm :eek: :rolleyes: :D :p
It's reallyyyyyyyyyyy GREAT!! :D heheeeeeeeeeeee

MonMon
10-18-2007, 06:14 AM
what? who? ana? no way!! the girl can write...

pppsssssttt hey!! write me a poem (about me) :D


Mona

ana_s
10-18-2007, 03:36 PM
Thanx guys,Im glad you like it :D :p

Oh & Billy...nema na cemu! (You'r welcome) :D

Lin Shaye
10-21-2007, 12:45 PM
Beautiful, Ana. I think what makes a poem wonderful for me, is tapping into feelilngs we all have. You did that. And with great vulnerablity and beauty. Keep on writing. You are very gifted.

ana_s
10-21-2007, 01:05 PM
Beautiful, Ana. I think what makes a poem wonderful for me, is tapping into feelilngs we all have. You did that. And with great vulnerablity and beauty. Keep on writing. You are very gifted.


Thanx Lin, for your couraging words. Im glad you liked the song :) :D
I try looking outside the box,like you said,the feelings we all have,but sometimes its hard to let it out and put it on a paper even tho I know exacly how I feel inside..

I'll try keep them coming :D :p :)

Lin Shaye
10-21-2007, 01:09 PM
xox I think it is safe to say, everyone who shares these boards hears you and appreciates you!

ana_s
10-21-2007, 01:14 PM
xox I think it is safe to say, everyone who shares these boards hears you and appreciates you!

haha :D I surely hope so Lin :) As the U2's song says.."We are one but we are not the same..."